Heavens Gate.

by Connor   May 21, 2007


When she'd cry,
she'd let one big sigh.
shes sitting there all alone,
she feels the decaying of her bone.
this cancer won't go away,
all it will do is stay.
shes only a young girl,
she likes things like pearls.
now she sits there on her own,
its still going at her bone.
and then the Nurse comes in,
and her name is Lyn.
she didn't no whats wrong,
but not for long.
she was dying,
as the doctor was trying.
its was to late,
she went to heavens gate.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Molly

    Great job connor! 5/5 very touching...lol

  • 17 years ago

    by skynerraw

    Aw...connor this is fantastic.....

  • 17 years ago

    by Navy Blue Heart

    That was a really interesting piece, I liked the choppyness of it and the fact that it was so abrupt and blunt added to the depressive feel of it. Fantastic! I really hope this wasn't something you had to witness though.

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow you made me depressed, nice poem 5/5 perhaps you can read one of mine.

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