by Corruption May 21, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
My eyes turn to glass |
Hey, |
by Ciao Bella
I really like this poem i havent seen u write like this before its different but i love it. |
Great poem thanks for the comment on "Sinful obsession" |
by Melpomene
I liked the poem but i agreed with wallace just on the capitalizing the letter of each line. I found this poem to be an enjoyable read with great emotions used throughout it. Well done~mel |
by Wallace
Nice poem, it had very strong emotions in it. But i think it would sound better if it rhymed and it would have looked more presentable if you started each line with a capital letter. Great job though. |