I want you to understand
by james May 21, 2007
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As i whisper i love u every night on each gentle breeze i hope you feel it on your face let it carry you all day as you wake with a smile of an angel and let my heart beats be the music you hear all day as it rains let that be my love falling from the heavens for you let it wash it away every pain you have let it ease your mind and as i write i smile and cry at the same time because you make me happy with every sight or thought of you but i cry because i cant have have you but i want you to know no matter what you will all ways be in heart warm and safe from everything I'll always be waiting for you |
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16 years ago
Great poem!!amazing job :)
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17 years ago
by Rachel
James - That was one of the sweetest and saddest poem eye've read in quite some while. If you didn't read that poem to the girl it's written for that might be why she's gone. She might just not know how much she means to you. You seem like a sad kid who needs some lovin.
-Rachel -
17 years ago
by ECILA ice
Well you have the thoughts in here and the emotions. Actually it's nice and sweet but i better suggest that u rewrite in such a way that it will look so pleasing coz i don't know where wnd when to stop. U didn't even put some commas or semicolon or periods if ever...NICE WORK
