Comments : Existence

  • 17 years ago

    by sian

    Hmmm this is an interesting poem, how did you come up with it? what inspired you? Sian xx

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Very well written poem, m'dear. Cute, honest, and from the heart. I really enjoyed it. I like the words you used, especially the "Turn the light on for me" metaphor that sometimes is overused but fits perfect in this part.

    Well done,
    5/5
    ~Stephen White

  • 17 years ago

    by xx Ali xx

    Hey. I love your poem. Nice Job!