Oh my... i did not expect that ending..
You've really raised a lot of thoughts with this piece
Short, sharp sentences really get the horror across...
Well done!
5/5
*Gem*

I loved the last verse, especially the last line! Fab!

I agree with Gem. I totally didnt see that ending. This was really good, I like how you show that killing is bad even though you're sent out to do it. Keep it up!