Hey . nice one keep it going :D |
by Cindy
Mohamed |
by hani
Very nice and beautiful , good work 5/5 |
I thought this was a good peom.. it flows well.. 5/5 |
Beautiful poem, lovely imagery in it :D |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
I liked this one. nicely written. the word choice was nicely done, and i liked the image i saw. |
by Marc Ortiz
It was a hard structure but you were able to do it well done! well penned! choice of words was amazing! keep up the good work! 5/5! |
Beautiful Ethree!..well written peice..excellent job....well chosen words...there is perfection n beauty in every line=) |
by Kaila
Very nice |
by claire
I thought this was awesome - it didn't even seem like u were deliberately following a format! i want to try an etheree - i'll be lucky if mines half as good as yours, if i can even write one! 5/5 |
Etheree! This form is koOL i suppose nw i wil try to write my own. This is superb dear. |
by Robert
The form was done rather well, I myself had always had a problem with perfect form but you pulled it off great in this peice the message again was lovely and it was a delight to read Plot121 |
I like this type of poem |
by Cella Bella
I haven't written an etheree before. I like the idea of writting structured poems. I think it's a great challenge. From what I see you did a great job with this poem. 5/5 |
Excellent job with this piece, although it was short the emotion was very deep and the style was unique. Fantastic job with this piece 5/5 GG23 |
by Hebe
What a beautiful Etheree. |
by Melpomene
Such a beautiful Etheree you have written here. The love behind this touched my heart as i'm sure it did many others. I loved how your pieces are unique in their own way. A good word choice which were created into such sweet simplicity. Well done on this gorgeous poem keep it up. Look forward to reading more from you. ~mel |
by Sweet lig
Shortly but very well express...... |
Again another real nice love poem, i like the way chose styles and themes for your poems xxx alex xxx |
by nikki
I said it before and i'll keep saying it. you have such a wonderful talent with your words and everyone poem i read, i believe it more and more. this was such a beautiful etheree, and it was well expressed, loved it 5/5 |