Disappointment [Reverse Etheree]

I liked your topic.
It was very... catchy.
I've always loved poems that had formats.
I've never done it before, so I dunno.
I just think it's pretty hard.
I'm always doing freeverse stuff.
Lol.
Dear, this was a wonderful poem.
It was simple and easy to read.
5/5 :]

I have never seen a Reversed Etheree before! Very cool that you took on this unique idea for the poem, this poem is also well written.
peace

The ending is what i found was trully excellent the most. it was fantastic and full filling. the heart ache you produced at the end was uncanny. well done.

5/5 David

First off I'd like to say thankyou for the comments on my poems, much appreciated. Secondly I'm glad my poems inspire just a little lol. Now onto the poem i truely enjoyed reading this, each word held strong emotion which was portrayed beautifully. Your vocab was excellent and flowed nicely throughout the whole thing. The syllable count was spot on from what I could see which was great. I liked how you gave this style ago its one of my favs. Well done with this. Amazing~mel

Lol...that's your first try...OMG!!!.EXCELLENT WORK...Very beautifullly penned...i like d this one...just used little words..but u hv said so much thru this superb write!!
lovely work..kp writing!
xxPoojaxx