by Hatori May 21, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Deathly nights of cold and dark, |
by Yuna
This poem was excellent! You've grown with your poetic abilities. you truly have! The vocabulary you used was magnificent, and how can it not be? I love the way you wrote it overall, because it flowed and it just sounded right. I'm not sure how to explain that. It was a very perfect poem, that's completely flawless! great job! |