OOooOO Very good vocabulary!!
This poem was wonderful and thought prosessing
I thought it had very good originality
It wasn't cliche
the rhyming was ok
but this poem was wonderful
5/5
love always kaila

The vocab was absoutly amazing, I really loved your word choice. The flow was fantastic, and the emtion was strong, nice descptive images, 5/5

Wow!!!...great write.....excellent vocab!
the rhme scheme was good n the flow was perfect...n it held such deep powerful emotions....beautiful...
5/5=)Good job!

xxPoojaxx

I liked it. I felt that the flow was a little off but other than that this was a very nice poem. I gave it a 5/5.

Well done on winning my contest !! ill do as many r/r/c as i can ok.

I love this poem, it was so strong and your style shone through. I loved the ay you mixed two ideas and combined them into one.
xxx alex xxx

Wow. That spoke volumes to me. It speaks (to me anyway) about how some people live in a dream world and how they can't come to grip with reality. It also talks about how dreams are way better than reality and that's why some people choose to live in the dream world. It's amazing. 5/5 for sure.

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

Wow, this poem is written very well. I loved it. It captured many things. Keep up the amazing work 5/5
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Beautifully penned poem! The language use was good. The descriptions was really great. Flow was smooth, keep it up! 5/5!

Wow, it is just great. Deep, touching and full of emotions. So sad on the end. I like it very much.
-And sometimes i see unicorns,
mermaids, wild and free,
and once again i wish i could swim forever in the sea.
Still, time must move on, we cannot sleep forever,
but when i wake up in my bed i cry,
for i do not want to say goodbye.-powerful stanza, it perfectly describe freedom. And again superb imagery, it deserves more then 5/5.

Great poem, excellently written and very true.
I can relate to it.
Third stanza is my favorite, it's amazingly written, especially these lines:
-Sometimes i imagine i have wings,
pure black in the brightness of night,
then i forget how the pain hurts, and everything feels allright.-
Well done, 5/5

This was a great poem. I loved the emotion portrayed really deep and hearfelt. I think alot of people an relate to this poem. I myself can because I always dream. I can't pick a favorite stanza they were all great to me. Honestly very touching. You wrote this in suchgreat depth that is pulled on the strings of my heart. Well done. Beautiful. ~Mel