by lost dream May 21, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I'm Sick & Tried Of Crying,Would You Ever Stop Lying, |
by Zara Baines
Has he really done all these things or are they your fears |
I liked it alot of emotion good job keep it up |
Hey ,, it's a great poem .. deep feelings and nice meaning .. keep it up :D |
by MaSkEdSoUl
This was good, it had a good rhyme. But when you type, dont capitalize the first letter of every word, I used to do that and it wasnt all that good. Try putting commas(,) where they need to be, it'll make it better, with pauses and not just a long sentence. But overall it was good. Keep it up! |