by lost dream May 21, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
How Could You Do This TO Me |
Good job done..... 5/5 |
by Syed
Really well done job...feelings are well expressed |
I liked it i can relate to it ~melissa~ |
by MaSkEdSoUl
I re-read the first stanza but I switched the first two lines and it sounded better. To me it didnt sound right the way it was so I just reversed it and, again, to me it sounded better. On this line: |
Good poem 3/5 |