Good poem 3/5
~missindependent~

I re-read the first stanza but I switched the first two lines and it sounded better. To me it didnt sound right the way it was so I just reversed it and, again, to me it sounded better. On this line:

"I Cried I'll cry Give Me Reasons "

I dont really get why you said I cried I'll cry. Thats all I had to say. People can relate to it. Keep it up!

I liked it i can relate to it ~melissa~

Really well done job...feelings are well expressed

Good job done..... 5/5