Only A Northern Song (double haiku)

This is a great little poem, very unique. Wonderfully vivid images. It conveys such a peaceful contented milieu. A beautiful piece.

Peace, poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

You've indeed mastered this difficult form. It's as if you've written this piece with ease. How I wish I could write like you someday!

Best wishes! Love, Debbie

What a beautiful form! Just in time for summer too.

Swell and soothing, it really shows promise! 5/5

Short, so sweet.
Full of imagery in word...
"Serene white caps prance
Lake Erie's slow summer dance"

The pebble drops and the ripple is felt.....
everywhere.....