by Crystal Gaze
This peice was very short, but still oh so sweet. It is really catchy and portrays alot of emotion.. |
by kasia nicole
That was good i liked hwo you rymed there |
by MyMuse
This was so short but so lovly, it brought tears to my eyes, love is like the water, itll never slow down, and dry out. Well done on this one! I love it all so much, its very dear to my heart<3 |
by AnnieBananie
I love this. :] |
by Kate Hicks
I love this. Have you tried writing Haiku's? I think you would be realy good at them. 5/5 |
by Ashley
I love this!! |
by Sharr
Short And Simple |
by Jenn
Short and simple, but nice! And I love that you personify "love" and "water" by capitalizing them. I do similar things in a lot of my poetry. By capitalizing "lives" and not "dies" I'm thinking that power of the water living is much greater than that of the water dying. Which is cool. That's just what I got out of it. 5/5 |