Just Me and You

How adorable. I really
like these lines "You are perfect for me, baby
And I'm so glad you are here." It's
great how you write. You did a superb job
writing this piece. :) I give it a 5/5!

The vocab. is pretty simple in this piece, but the emotion is overwhelming and seems to come straight from the heart. [sometimes that's all you need for a great poem] It was sweet and you got the point across. Great love poem. 5/5

marecella

It's really sweet and cute :) Your poems come straight to the heart. Fantastic work. I like your style in writing you're really talented. 5/5

This was also quite cute. I found the word choice to be so simple and yet so effective it really held emotion which was capturing and heartfelt. Short and sweet. Well done on this. A good poem you have here~mel

Awww so cute and sweet and touching. Easy to read and getting message across. More special makes it that it comes straight from your heart. Hope you let that boy read it some day.
Keep up the great work!
5/5