We could make it on our own,
We don't need anyone else,
You are perfect for me, baby
And I'm so glad you are here.

welldone. i loved that it was short but very strong emotions of true love i have seen and felt for a second. goodwork. take care 5/5

Well done, good luck as well. I don't know about the flow at some points but the message is so clear and because its so heartfelt it really doesnt matter. Touched me so it was awesome, 5/5 :)

Nice job. it was a rush to reaf though. try slowing the poem down with more words or certain types of words.

defiantly<<i think you meant another word which i cant spell cuz im stupid.

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Aww very cute
i liked the story
but the poem was
a tad off but it's okay
nice poem

Shot sweet and touching. I really like this, and the flow is great, and word choice wondewrful, and the emtion was strong. perfectly written poem. 5/5

Wow!....very cute.so sweet....short n simple yet well written
Thoufh the flow was a little off at some places...i liked the love which was filled in this work!
Great job!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

Awww so cute and sweet and touching. Easy to read and getting message across. More special makes it that it comes straight from your heart. Hope you let that boy read it some day.
Keep up the great work!
5/5

This was also quite cute. I found the word choice to be so simple and yet so effective it really held emotion which was capturing and heartfelt. Short and sweet. Well done on this. A good poem you have here~mel

It's really sweet and cute :) Your poems come straight to the heart. Fantastic work. I like your style in writing you're really talented. 5/5

The vocab. is pretty simple in this piece, but the emotion is overwhelming and seems to come straight from the heart. [sometimes that's all you need for a great poem] It was sweet and you got the point across. Great love poem. 5/5

marecella

How adorable. I really
like these lines "You are perfect for me, baby
And I'm so glad you are here." It's
great how you write. You did a superb job
writing this piece. :) I give it a 5/5!