Every tear

by xo kisses xo   May 21, 2007


When life seems to turn on you
and the pain won't go away.
You've done everything you can
and theres nothing left to say.

Every tear falls for a reason
every cut comes with pain.
You can't seem to get rid of it
now you're feeling so insane.

Trying to hold on
but your hands are letting go.
Loving him so much
and never letting anyone know.

Don't let this get you down
don't let them see you cry.
There's better things to do
than let life pass you by.

i got the inspiration for this from the song broken by lindsey haun. if u have never heard that song then u should look it up on youtube.com cuz it is wonderful

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    This was beautiful

    Trying to hold on
    but your hands are letting go.

    ^i loved those 2 lines... they just like spoke to me... your amazing... and i love that song broken btw... 5/5 from me :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Mandy

    I <33333 this!!! beautiful!!!! 5/5

    <33333
    MaNdErZzZ

  • 17 years ago

    by RawrItsDollfacex

    Well i personally hate Lindsay Loahn but hey this poem is great.

  • 17 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    I hate when people try to tell you every little thing that wrong with your poem they need to stop all they need to say is there was a few mistakes damn!! Your poem was great girl its perfectly fine!

  • 17 years ago

    by silence kills

    Very nice ^_^ favorite part is 'trying to hold on but my hands are letting go' and i completely know how that feels .__.' 5/5

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