Great job

Very nice ^_^ favorite part is 'trying to hold on but my hands are letting go' and i completely know how that feels .__.' 5/5

I hate when people try to tell you every little thing that wrong with your poem they need to stop all they need to say is there was a few mistakes damn!! Your poem was great girl its perfectly fine!

Well i personally hate Lindsay Loahn but hey this poem is great.

I <33333 this!!! beautiful!!!! 5/5

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MaNdErZzZ

This was beautiful

Trying to hold on
but your hands are letting go.

^i loved those 2 lines... they just like spoke to me... your amazing... and i love that song broken btw... 5/5 from me :]