As i stare into your
eyes...shining oh so
bright...i can't help
but fall in love with you...
Every time i see you
at school...you make
my heart beat fast like
a lightening...but...I can't
tell you how i feel...its too
hard...what if you didn't
love me the way i do?
If you didn't...well...i tried...
but please don't let this happen...
Heya!
Nice poem
Nice flow
but i think u shud divide it into stanzas
and make it a bit longer
bcz this poem was very good and i wanted to read more!!
anyway,nice poem all round ^^