Comments : Break up with you...

  • 17 years ago

    by Birgit

    That's a situation that I know.. hehe =) Good poem! Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Your = you're

    and be free= want to be free

    I just don't understand = I just don't understand why you even loved me...

    And at times I can't even take your hand. = emit

    know what to do = know what I must do

    Great poem m'dear! I really did enjoy this, and i suggest you correct the poem with the modifications listed above.

    Well written =]
    5/5
    ~Stephen White