Hell

Yea i felt like that when my ex broke up with me but you need to remember that everything happens for a reason and i guess that was supposed to happen...But i love the way you flowed with it and i just love the way you use your words in your writting 5/5

Very nice vocabulary
it hurts to know someone feels this way though
because I know how you feel
I've been there and done that
and think your an amazing poet
5/5
from kaila

Some of your lines are pretty random.
They're not all that consistent.
For example:
At the very beginning of your poem,
You're talking about
Being hurt and ruined
Next thing you know
You're talking about a guy.
That's a humongous jump for me.
I thought it would be cliched.
Just because of your beiginning.
But somehow, you made it not be.
I don't know.
Maybe your usage of words?
Other than that.
It was alright.
It wasn't the best I've read in this whole
Poem site.
It also wasn't the worst.
And believe me.
I've read a lot worse than this.
4/5 dearest?