Very good poem. "Darling, don't fret, I'm used to your lies.
Just hope I rest in pieces.
Thats what I wish for, all I dream of"
very powerful words from someone this young.. wait im only 1 year older so i cant be saying tat but ohh well :) great work 5/5

Amazing, m'dear.
The wording fit perfectly,
the last sentence fit with the poem,
so flawlessly.
5/5

-Heather