by Sorefromreality May 21, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
Don't hurt her, or you'll hurt me |
Absolutely loved it! lots of feeling |
by Tammie
I like this poem a lot because it shows how much you care for this girl. The flow was pretty good the whole way through, and the rhyming is written well. The only thing that I could suggest might be a more appealing title. But that's just a minor thing. Well done on this. =] |
by Ike Dizzle
This is a good poem though to me it seem liked it ended too quickly. Great job though 5/5 |