Excellent poem, too. "Tonight, it is her and her world
Her pain
Her fear
They all mix into one
And sculpt her life together"
~my favorite stanza.
5/5

I didnt find this poem as good as your previous two. But still i liked the structure of it. The secound and third line being so short, only one or two words while the rest of the poem lines are noticably longer. An intresting structure. Your alliteration of; "rusted razor" gives the impression this razor is quite old. This tells me that self harm has been in this girl's life for quite a while. This line; "Slicing through the scarred skin" youve got this 'S' sound going on, it really emphasises what she is doing and i can kinda hear the little sound it makes. The meotion was quite clear andi could relate to this poem a little bit. Im sure many people can. A good read. Keep writing! Once more i urge you to to use punctuation in your work. xx