Is this the beginning or the end
Cause I think I found a friend
But in a way I never thought,
And I'm pretty sure I ought...
...to be the best woman I can
Stronger than I began
And I'm sure I'll find the man for me.
..but not just yet
Cause I can't forget
To take the time for me
Cause if not I'll regret..
...my actions, attractions, reactions, distractions and such.
So in the mean time, until its time, its time for me.
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Comments please. Its written to sound more like a song... first poem written in about 2 years, I'm trying to have a positive outlook on the breakup with my boyfriend and how we are still trying to be friends in the midst of it all. (which is a complicated thing of course)
I liked this...
The flow was smooth throughout, the emotion is clear for the reader to see.
I do think more could be added to it, and made a little longer, but other than that I enjoyed this.