by fatal bliss is the best way to die May 21, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I'm so broken inside i fake a smile so you can't see the war going onside me the thought that i have the cuts that i make everynite the pills that i take to make myself that they will make my pain go away but it'll never work I'm a a girl who's broken inside with a war inside her no one knows the feelings the thought the physical pains i put on me because I'm so broken inside |
by Angel
Nice poem.......i can completely relate to it.......it takes a lot to get up every single mornin when all u wana do is sleep ur way into oblivion......looks like we're in the same boat, only its headed downstream.........nice work |
by Corruption
Wow so sad and painful good job i like these kind of poems and im glad your friends keep you going :D good job and thanks for the comment |
Beautiful work! |
I like this its really good! |
by Jamie Rose
Okay so thanks for leaving me a comment on my poem. i just wrote a bunch last nite cos i was in that kinda mood i guess. but i absolutely love this poem. im gna let u go so i can read some more. |