Im so broken inside

by fatal bliss is the best way to die   May 21, 2007


I'm so broken inside i fake a smile so you can't see the war going onside me the thought that i have the cuts that i make everynite the pills that i take to make myself that they will make my pain go away but it'll never work I'm a a girl who's broken inside with a war inside her no one knows the feelings the thought the physical pains i put on me because I'm so broken inside

idk if this is good plz give me comments on it

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  • 17 years ago

    by Angel

    Nice poem.......i can completely relate to it.......it takes a lot to get up every single mornin when all u wana do is sleep ur way into oblivion......looks like we're in the same boat, only its headed downstream.........nice work

  • 17 years ago

    by Corruption

    Wow so sad and painful good job i like these kind of poems and im glad your friends keep you going :D good job and thanks for the comment

    keenan

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Beautiful work!
    It's deep...really deep and filled wth emotions
    Good job!
    5/5
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by just a little bit hurt

    I like this its really good!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jamie Rose

    Okay so thanks for leaving me a comment on my poem. i just wrote a bunch last nite cos i was in that kinda mood i guess. but i absolutely love this poem. im gna let u go so i can read some more.

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