I liked this poem very much, it had good flow and great meaning. I liked how you started every stanza with "If I vanished tomorrow" I thought it was perfect. Nice job 5/5

Oh wow. This poem is deff. going in my favorite poems category. The depth overall, kept me reading.. I loved it! Great work =]

Would I remain in your [[hearts]]?
Don't you mean, heart?
If this is a one on one thing.
It's probably just going to be heart.
It's okay, I guess.
It seemed kind of forced.
Although it wasn't the best I've read
It's also not one of the worst.
I'm going to have to vote a 4.
I love your topic, though.
If you want the vote, PM me.
I don't know if you'd want someone
Down voting you.

Awe great poem. i loved it and wow ur just talented! keep up the good work! i;d love it if you'd check out my poems and comment/rate them thanks alot!
Rachel<3

Amazing poem, excellently written. Keep up the fantastic work.

Best Wishes
Wallace

I liked this poem. Its a question I always ask myself and I can totally relate. This was a really good piece of work. 5/5 Good Job

Very Good!
Great Write
It flowed really good
i can relate to this and i think most people can
5/5

Whoo ! Great write (:
It`s so easy to relate to and captures every corner of the thought of "If I Vanished Tomorrow ..."
Please insert puncuation tho -.-''
I felt like the ending was weaker than the rest of the poem, but still a very great write .
..__MiNDYY

I like the flow sometimes in poems with the same style of rhyme it gets real kiddy but you kept it mature I really liked it

I liked this 1...great job!..i think all your readers might be able to relate to this 1...the flow was good n it held strong emeotions n dpth..n good write...over all...a 5/5!
xxPoojaxx

I have thought of these thoughts on such occasions wherein I feel quite blue.

This is a great poem! Really enjoyed reading it. Simple to read and still touchy. Ryhme was great. amazing write. Keep up the great work! :) 5/5

This was quite a great poem, I enjoyed reading it and found the words to hold alot of emotion. Deep and strong. An amazingly written poem you have here. Well done on it. A truely interesting read.~mel

I really enjoyed reading that poem. Keep up the good work! ^^ 5/5

Wow! Great flow and rhyme...good questions too. it's full of things I'm sure we all think about from time to time, the big what-ifs!
Charisma*

I identify with your choice of topic. This piece addresses it well. Thanks for the read! :)

Remarkable, I loved the flow, and the word choice was strong. the emtion was deep, and the message was clear. This one I would have to say is my favorite.

I dont even know what to say except WOW.
Amazing Job.

5/5. excellent poem can relate to what you've written. very heart felt. well done. keep writing

.WOW. ALL I CAN SAY IS THAT I KNOW WHAT YOU ARE GOING THROUGH.