by Karl Wild GG23 May 21, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Pressure is placed on all shoulders, |
by LoreNz0
Even the votes and comments on this piece dont do justice to this fine work of art. |
One the best poems i've read today and trust me that's very good |
Wow =) very nice poem =) |
This one has especially good rhythm and word choice. Using words that could sometimes seem awkward (like endeavor) has worked perfectly in this case. The title and content work together well to display the meaning, if that makes sense. Very well written! |
This is by far the most inspirational poem i have read.... it's awesome=) and moving |