I effing love this poem.
Although some stanzas seem kind of forced.
For example:
Remain faithful to yourself and desires,
Never jeopardize, for a moment of glory,
Hard work and heart is all life requires,
We're all writers of our own life story.
Umm...
It was great, until it reached to the
Life story.
It didn't really flow as well as your other stanzas.
It also kind of seemed show offish to me.
But then it flowed so beautifully
That it was hard to tell.
All in all my dear,
It was very well written.
5/5?

This is a great poem.. i especially love the ending stanza and the last line.. very well written and the meaning is deep... greatt job!.. and thanks for the comment =]

This was a very very very good poem. It had an excellent flow. It was to the point. You did a wonderful job. 5/5. Its on my favorites. Keep up the good work.

I really enjoyed reading this poem, I found it to be quite amazing with a great meaning portrayed throughout it. It kept me interested from start till end. The flow was flawless and the ryhme scheme was great. The vocab was pretty simple but yet held so much emotion in each word. Well done on a nicely penned poem ~mel

I loved this 1...i loved these lines too..
"Hard work and heart is all life requires,
We're all writers of our own life story"
Beautiful word choice n the rhymes fitted in well to add to the beauty...the poem is soo true...you portrayed tons of emotions thru this 1...which was a good job!
Loved it!
5/5!!
xxPoojaxx

Wow this is amazingly written. I loved it. You really did a wonderful job. 5/5
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Absoulty amazing, i really effin loved this, i don't think the any of the words seemed forced the rhymes seemed perfect, the flow was flawless, and the word choice was brillant. perfectly written, and that is no bs just an honest comment, 5/5 although for this brillant work you deserve more.

This is beautiful..wonderfully and elegantly written, the flow is flawless throughout the entire poem, imagery creates vivid pictures and the rhyme scheme and word choice are enjoyable.
Beautiful.

Hahaha that was simply amazing! well done! flow was good for me! the love the imagery running in this poem! well done! excellent choice of words! keep writing! I enjoyed reading this one! 5/5!

A very inspiring peace of writing. Very meaningful. I loved the fact it made me think (i love poems which do that). Anyways first of all i think you should change the title of this. If i was browsing your poem titles and looking for something to read this owuldnt of been it. And becuase i really enjoyed this, its a shame. So yeah try thinking of a title that may catch the readers attention. I liked the rhyme structure of the poem. None seemed forced or cliche. Worked well. When reading the poem instantly the reader incounters a alliteration; "Pressure is placed" the rest of this line is something we can all relate to - weve all had pressure. It makes us want to read on becuase of this fact. The rest of your poem you state your... thoughts i guess, in a clear way. You make the reader think about what your saying. You lanuage was clear and nothing too complicated. Your vocabulary showed clear meaning. I liked it, but to improve it i suggest you use a more varied punctuation.

I freakin` loved this . It`s inspiring . The flow wasn`t GREAT, but it was good . The vocabulary is like whoa, but it doesn`t take away from the poem .

As you embark on this journey you chose.
`I don`t know why, but I really liked that line . I guess it`s cuhs` I know a lot of people that can`t accept the fact that they chose this road & not someone else .

Anyways, just ah`mazing . There`s so much meaning, truth about life .
Absolutely brilliant .
..__MiNDYY

The awesome wisdom of this poem was the dominant feature in my mind as I prepared to give you my comment. The rhyme scheme was perfect. Outstanding work.

It was very well written. good work take care

Its well written. I think the line "With lessons, that have yet been taught." is grammatically wrong. The lessons here are not yet taught but you used the word yet. It sounds wrong to me. The next four lines are beautifully written. especially paragraphs 3 & 4. A 5/5

Okay, dude, you're amazing! Haha.

"Remain faithful to yourself and desires,
Never jeopardize, for a moment of glory,
Hard work and heart is all life requires,
We're all writers of our own life story."

^^ That last stanza was amazing. It really sums up what you were trying to say in the poem as a whole. Nicely done.

Great words and phrases
they really made your poem stick out
nice work
this poem is very amazing

This is a great poem, all your poems make e really think about things a lot, i dont know its just the way you put your feelings into words is amazing you are a talented person...5/5

How inspirational Karly, reading your poem made me feel like a super ninja killa.

6.3/5

Wow this is awesome. Flowing perfect with perfect rhymes and great wordings. This piece is both lexically and poetically strong.

The memories of yesterday's corruption,
Haunt the ambition of tomorrow's dreams,
Beware of life's complicated interruption,
For nothing shall ever be what it seems.

perfect lines with a great message 5/5

tc
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This was written very cleverly .. i lovd the words that you chose to use, and your flow was very good. The last stanza totally captured the rest of the poem;

"Remain faithful to yourself and desires,
Never jeopardize, for a moment of glory,
Hard work and heart is all life requires,
We're all writers of our own life story."

^^ that sums up not only your poem, but also life, and in four lines! truley incredible! very inspiring!

great write !

tC

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