I won't compare

by silence kills   May 21, 2007


I won't compare you to a rose
because roses wilt and die
i won't compare you to a dove
because they can't reach past the sky

i won't compare you to the sun
because the sun goes down at night
i won't compare you to the moon
because it doesn't shed much light

i won't compare you to a sunset
because they happen only once a day
i won't compare you to a memory
because memories fade away

i won't compare you to a fire
because they're easily put out
i won't compare you to the stars
because they just fall and burnout

i can't compare you to anything
whether it be living fake or real
because nothing can describe;
the way you make me feel

silence-kills 5/21/07

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  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    Does your talent NEVER cease? It's like I think I've found my new favorite poem, and then BAM you have one better! This is just breathtaking. I love the way you take things ALL poets use to compare love to and you blow them out of the water, and it didn't sound cheesy or anything. It's great!
    *ME*

  • 17 years ago

    by eternalxxpromise

    Oooh!
    i absolutely love thiss!!
    it's so going on my favorite poems list. !

    it's so cuteee. :D

  • 17 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Awww! thats so sweet. its really good and really true!