What a heart-felt poem. It is extremely refreshing to see someone accepting criticism so well and embracing it in such a manner. How beautiful when you say,

"For being there when needed...
You moved the clouds, I see the sun"

I believe writing holds a path to enlightenment and I think you do my belief justice when you say these words. It is almostlike you are saying, "the path to happiness must be full of people who will help u see the light." A very beautiful perspective.

"in every verse I swear,
I'll keep your criticism,
And in my poems, you'll be there."

The ending of you poem is extremely sweet. What an honour to these poets to be remembered in every line you right. A very very cute poem indeed.

Well done for comming up with such a unique poem.

Please have a look at my poems and let me know what you think. :)

Natalie