Fly

by Lu   May 22, 2007


Fly

On my own
spread my wings and glide
though I never fly alone
the Lord is forever by my side

Take my hand please
guide me through this sorrow
with loving gentleness and ease
on the beautiful wings of tomorrow

fly
with me

Dedicated to Darryll's Aunt Laura who passed away a few short hours ago after having heart
surgery.
Spread your wings and fly sweet Angel

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.(Odd & Even) form created by: R.T.V.W very own Steven Beesley

Stanza 1 (Odd Syllable Counts)

Line 1 - 3 Syllables A
Line 2 - 5 Syllables B
Line 3 - 7 Syllables A
Line 4 - 9 Syllables B

Stanza 2 (Even Syllable Counts)

Line 1 - 4 Syllables C
Line 2 - 6 Syllables D
Line 3 - 8 Syllables C
Line 4 - 10 Syllables D

Last Stanza (Odd & Even Syllables)

Line 1 - 1 Syllable E
Line 2 - 2 Syllables F

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  • 16 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Very beautiful poem :)

    im sorry that i leave such crappy comments =\

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    WOW that was a beautifully written poem , straight from the heart with a lot of love, wonderful job and wording was great , love poems like that excellent job Luanne, keep it up. your friend Tracy d 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie84

    And Dear Luanne, I am so sorry for your loss. I do pray that you and everyone else are ok today! God Bless!

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie84

    "beautiful wings of tomorrow"

    That is my favorite part...that line made the poem untouchable!!! WOW!!!

    What a beautiful write. I have never read any of your work and said I didn't like it...you have a gift and you use it well!!! Damn good!!

  • 17 years ago

    by sarah

    Awwwww such a sweet poem! i luv it! it wa so orignal, flowin perfectly and conveyin the lightness ov flight! keep it up! =)