He Loves Me Not (edited)

Hey,
aww thats cute, really adorable, at first I that that it was a bit cliche but im wrong, the ending is kind of unique and I love these lines:When I know he doesnt love me?" I reply "whether he love me or not,
I will love him"
definitely a 5/5 from me,
kisses stephanie

Meant instead it saying - I reply "whether he love me or not,
I will love him" it would say he loves you back too lol

Short and sweet love... and thing is we all at some point pick up a flower and do that... youll do it agan one day love and your ending will change.. istead it saying
it will say he loves me too.. and u just gotta wait for that person sweety... very cute...

o my other poem is called MY FRIEND BE HONEST

thanks love

Short, sweet, love it

I like this. It was okay, but I think you should expand it. It is insufficient of good details. Methinks that it's just a portion of an even greater poem. Hm... Nevertheless, it was a nicely-penned, bittersweet, love poem. It made me think how silly I was upon doing such a fantastic thing. I suppose that's how it tends to be--we drift away from reality... very nice. :) Keep it up. Take care, Debbie