This is cute!
And i can relate to this..
So sad..
Short but sweet.. and you got your point across.. very good..

Perfect poem.

doesnt = doesn't

(except for that lol)

Great job. Small, but emotional and powerful.

5/5
~Stephen White

I'm not going to judge this on grammar.
Because clearly, you has passed.
I WILL tell you how I felt.
I felt as though I've read this before
But then I have not.
It was one of those mixed situations.
But then
I kind of expected that the person
Wouldn't love her.
Because... well that's what I usually read about.
I liked your ending.
But I think it could be better.

Short and sweet.. :D

when i first started reading this i though oh no another cliche.. because of the whole he loves me he loves me not thing.. however... the last line when you ask yourself why you are doing this when you already know the answer is very original and a great concept.. i think that its a good poem but that much more could be done with it.. more detail and depth could be added :D

I like this. It was okay, but I think you should expand it. It is insufficient of good details. Methinks that it's just a portion of an even greater poem. Hm... Nevertheless, it was a nicely-penned, bittersweet, love poem. It made me think how silly I was upon doing such a fantastic thing. I suppose that's how it tends to be--we drift away from reality... very nice. :) Keep it up. Take care, Debbie

Short, sweet, love it

Short and sweet love... and thing is we all at some point pick up a flower and do that... youll do it agan one day love and your ending will change.. istead it saying
it will say he loves me too.. and u just gotta wait for that person sweety... very cute...

o my other poem is called MY FRIEND BE HONEST

thanks love

Meant instead it saying - I reply "whether he love me or not,
I will love him" it would say he loves you back too lol

Hey,
aww thats cute, really adorable, at first I that that it was a bit cliche but im wrong, the ending is kind of unique and I love these lines:When I know he doesnt love me?" I reply "whether he love me or not,
I will love him"
definitely a 5/5 from me,
kisses stephanie