Your words held such beauty, you portrayed this poem so beautifully its left me in sheer amazement.

May the azure that lingers
Around thine eyes be as blue

Those two lines at the start truely capturing, Made me want to keep on reading until the end. This poem i found to be interesting and lovely. Well done~mel

Hmm, ur intellect is astrounding debbers, i mean, even now i cant use such complex and graphic wording like u use, i give it a 5/5!!!

*little scream*

So my fave of yours Debbie!
Your language is so gorgeous and i loved the whole tone of this poem.
Especially the last part, for some reason it made me smile. Don't know why, i think it was the scoundrel bit =)
Brava m'dear!
5/5
*Gem*

Whoa! I like this - what a twist on the conventinal gooey love poem! Usually I'm annoyed when people try to get away with saying things like "thine..." but you've done it quite well. You captured an already eloquent era very creatively. I know I'm not much older than you, but I still have to say that your vocabulary is exceedingly developed for a teenager. Or an American. : D Or maybe you're from Australia... Very good work. The last two stanzas were brilliant.

-sibyllene

(One question: you have "Yet as touch is as cold." Do you mean "his touch?" "Your touch?")

Wow Deb!
What a twist on this one. Excellent job.

Yet as touch is as cold
as the winter's snow,
I shall shudder and cry
in contemptuous fear.
For 'tis in willful, wicked feats,
like silent snickering of demons,
I find thee most charming...

What a lovely [scoundrel] you are, darling!
...Indeed, indeed; in morbid deeds.

Loved your ending :)
LOve your friend Cindy

Wow.. This is really deep. Probably one of the best i have read so far.. your really talented in the art of making poetry.. 5/5

This is beautiful

Wow.... great job i think there may be another Shakespeare on the way lol great job you did a wonderful job and thanks for your comment i had made a typo about the guides part i had it written on paper as guided lol well thank you again and great job on this poem!!!:D:D:D

keenan

May the azure that lingers
Around thine eyes be as blue
^^Wow!!!...beautiful
I loved the choice of words in this one..i liked the twist in this one...great work!
It flowed smoothly and tyhe vocab was superb!
Great work!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

This poem starts out like a pretty average love poem but it has a surprising twist at the end, which is rather good. The choice of words was again strong and the imagery was perfect. Excellent work 5/5

I really liked this one. It had wonderful word choice and the flow was good all through out the poem. I gave it a 5/5.

The transition and contrast from the first 2 stanzas beautiful seemingly perfect romance to the third stanza's "winter's snow" is really effective and just really truthful how love can be amplified in strange ways..

i honestly love reading your work, and i'll keep checking back.

The flow is flawless in this piece plus I loved your use of appropriate lexis and style.
Its superb with descriptions.

Tc
With love
Fsams

I was a bit confused reading the heading but after reading it i have realized its content. Superb and well penned.

Again, a perfect one. i cannot find enough words to describe how great are your poems, as each one of them has its own beauty and its own great message.Yet as touch is as cold
as the winter's snow,
I shall shudder and cry
in contemptuous fear.

so beautifuly penned.
in this one i really liked the part

Beautiful Debbie.
I love reading your work, because you use such amazing vocab. your imagery is really awesome.
another great write
xxxxxx

Another beautiful poem by Debbie lol. This was so well written. I love the vocab! Not to mention when I read, I got a sord of peaceful feeling, lol. anyway 5/5

marcella

What can I say, beautiful m'dear. another 5/5 peice. =]

You write such intelligant and beautiful poems that I don't see myself ever comparing to. Lol. You have strong use of vocabulary words and just wonderful structer with your writing. Well done. I enjoyed your poems. Thank you very much for the comments. God Bless 5/5
<3Tay

UR a natural poet keep up the goo work
5/5