Holy shit - that was an amazing poem Erin. My best friend dyed 11-05-05 and it tortures me everyday just remembering how much love she showed me. And when we kiss...those moments are just infinite.

This is a beautiful poem...the imagery was great, i could feel what you were saying...
this was really touching
(i have a sugestion though, maybe you could divide it into stanzas, it can look like a normal text for someone more distracted...)
5/5
keep up the great work
*isabel*

I think the first comment there says it all "holy shit"....that was incredible..its great that you portray such emotion without drowning it in metaphors..

"But what we have together is special to me, our friendship is more now it's easy to see."...just goes to show that someone good can come out of something bad

great work...wow