I thought this was really good. I like the title. It is very impressive. Well done. Xx Chrissie

Lovely poem..this is soo true...beutiful subject to write on...good work...perfectly flowd n good description..n i loved the first stanza
xxPoojaxx

I liked this poem i found it to flow nicely like a chant and the description was great. It was an interesting read quite flawless with no flaws. Well done loved it~mel

Nicely rhymed piece. So sweet and short words. Is this one of your latest work after being away for a long time. Its great 5/5
Tc
Fsams

Great job, I really enjoyed your poem!

Eeeek!
This is the first poem to go on my favourites.
I loved it.
I love a poem with such speed.
The short stanzaz and sentances speed up the flow and create powerful images.

I loved ittt!

And the topic is one I adore, and have wrote poetry on time and again.

Well done. =]

Amazing poem! i love the short stanzas and the very descriptive words and images yu created. truly amazing. keep it up :)