Comments : Trapped

  • 17 years ago

    by The Unwritten Love

    It's a great poem .. deep emotions ... good job

  • 17 years ago

    by xx Ali xx

    I love it!!♥

    keep writing...it says you don't think you're good...i really think you are. Keep writing, it just gets your feelings out. atleast that's what it does for me. have a good day!

    if you need to talk or just let everything out...you can always message me, i don't judge people.. :)
    I've also been through some stuff it talks about in your poems..

    ~Ali

  • 17 years ago

    by STEVE

    I really do know what you mean in the way you expressed yourself and the words you used to show how you feel Steve

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Ack, at times i feel trapped too...
    but i guess everyone has a point in their life when they feel that way.

    5/5 love.

    keep writing, i'm always here to read :)

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Sometimes I feel like that...
    Short but effective, 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Hebe

    Realistic poem.
    Beautiful written.
    Great rhyme, a pleasure to read.
    Take care