Lol...it's great...very nice poetry...mean more or less u've explained your new style "Trhyme" in a good way clearly...Good wrk..n lol...great try!
Kp it up!
5/5!
xxPoojaxx

Hmm, despite the seeming fact that the rhythm and rhymes were somewhat taut and natural, I'd still give you my props for inventing your own formed poetry. =) Lovely write.

*unnatural, I mean. My apologies. =)

Hehe, this was really cute.
I liked how you told how to do the poem in the poem itself!
Trippy!
5/5
*gem*

Fsams
Love it :) Great job! LOL
Take care Cindy

Ahh interesting.. i didn't even kno we had another way to make a poem called Tryhme.. very interesting topic.. but it showed me how to write it.. thanks but good job and keep up the good work 5/5

That is so neat how you did that...interesting..:) love is 5/5

~Ali♥

I liked how you made your poem an instructive poem. You kept the rules of a Trhyme and made a poem out of it. Pretty smart I say! the flow was clear and to wrap it up, this poem was very well written! Great job!

Very nice
good way of explaining
i loved it

Funny n rlly different! 5/5!

He he this is v interesting. ppl wil try this form i think. I shal try. 5/5

Lol... Interesting and very original poem. It is crazy in a good way.

Ha! fantastic! what a great way to write! what a great thing to write about! a poem about a poem and the style of the poem in the poem... if that makes sense... (not sure it does...) anyhow, loved it. really well written.

Well inlighting I often don't write in a stanza most of my work is with message not stanza but besides that this was a good read Plot121