Oh my... this poem left me speechless. It's so beautiful and so full of sadness and I can't tell you how much I enjoyed reading it! I could feel the saddess and the pain overflowing the poem, I loved it. I loved these lines too:

"i am going to bed for an eternal sleep
i will never see the sun sky or moon
i am dying slowly but i will be dead soon"

They were my favorite... very nice work! Please keep up the wonderful job and good luck on your other creations in the future. 5/5 <3 <3

~Loveless Nights~