"The wrecked halls
Of my mirrored reflections
Spill upon the pave
Of my revolution"
These lines are really powerful.
The rest of the poem is well written, too, it has some dark energy within the words.
I love it. 5/5

As a person who battles with my own inner demons every day i can really relate to this poem, the uniform then non-uniform line lengths can be a little distracting but it does not detract from the overall poem and in the end i enjoyed it quite a bit and I will have to read more of your work

Very beautiful, deep and soulful. 4 /4 ! Keep it up! do comment and read mine please, could use the critisism... regards Arun.