by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup May 22, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
I walk down this street, |
Wow, great poem, with the contrast of black and white and everything... awesome, written very well. :) 5/5, for sure! |
by Benny Boi
Alot of pain... Alot of emotion... A friggen good poem too. Best poetry comes from these things... although they should never happen! 10/10 |
by Ike Dizzle
This is a cool poem. Lol that's how some ppl see the world. But once you find one person who cares it won't be too black lol. Great job. 5/5 |
Wow that was a GREAT wirte i loved it seriouly u did a great job with it i loved how u repated the whole ina world painted black it flowed awsome to, nice write 5/5 always |
Thats a great poem, I can really relate to it! |