I love this intire poem.
i just dont like this line too much

(All I hear is "to the ground",
I try to fight.
I try to mutter.
All I can to is fall with fright!)

5/5

That's really weird.....not knowing what the guy did to you?
>_<!
nice poem, annoys me when there is an 's' missing of stuff but it's really pretty good.

I like the poem, simple and easy. Leaves u in suspense. 5/5, check out some of my stuff! thxz

Nice nesse wow is all i can say

Yo that is tight,sometimes i do think bout dis world like dat,u good,l8er

This is a good poem!...u say whats on ur mind!....keep it up!...feel free to read some of my poems! im not very good but comments r greatly appreaciated! cheers

Thats a great poem, I can really relate to it!

Wow that was a GREAT wirte i loved it seriouly u did a great job with it i loved how u repated the whole ina world painted black it flowed awsome to, nice write 5/5 always
Kate~

This is a cool poem. Lol that's how some ppl see the world. But once you find one person who cares it won't be too black lol. Great job. 5/5
-vino

Alot of pain... Alot of emotion... A friggen good poem too. Best poetry comes from these things... although they should never happen! 10/10

Wow, great poem, with the contrast of black and white and everything... awesome, written very well. :) 5/5, for sure!