Aaaaaaaaaah it was such a great work. i realy enjyed while readin this poem. take care

Man I forgot how good a writer you were. This poem is very inspirational. Great job. 5/5
-vino

I just got done reading your poem and I'm amazed at all that you included in your poem. It truly shows the duality in the form of words and lines intertwined into a quilt called a poem. You express the title of the poem through out the poem and it was well written & organized. I voted this poem for the weekly contest because I feel that it has some much power in it, keep up the good work.

Peace, Power & Poetry,

Nick York

Wow, good one gary, i really like the perspective. good idea of the barrier between reality and illusion, actually just did a project on this very subject, from Shakespeare's Midsummers Nights Dream. Have you read it? Well if not, i recommend , its a good example of this. keep it up as always gary, with the brilliant writing!

Wow. Great piece, your wording is superb. Topic is incredible, really amazing. You have so much poems and this one shoves your experience. 5/5

Very nice Gary, beautiful piece of writ