by Daisy if you do May 22, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Upon endless pages the ink has dried |
by Rachel RTVW
Excellent job on this form ! The flow is great and the poem is meaningful. |
Wow this was really good. I liked the words you used.. its really nice to see someone else trying out a style that one of our own members created. The only thing I have to say is although you did a really good job the first line only has six words not seven so you should fix that soon. Nice write otherwise though. |
by Debbie
"Poetic quittance to make me feel whole |