"Poetic quittance to make me feel whole

Passionate penance, heart, mind and soul"

I absolutely admire this piece. 'Twas very nicely written and it speaks for and from itself. =) Lovely.

Wow this was really good. I liked the words you used.. its really nice to see someone else trying out a style that one of our own members created. The only thing I have to say is although you did a really good job the first line only has six words not seven so you should fix that soon. Nice write otherwise though.

Excellent job on this form ! The flow is great and the poem is meaningful.