I also wrote a poem based on the line "roses are red, violets are blue" called "Lie dead sweet roses, whlie the biolets play", but i kind of diegressed from that by the end. yours was much better.
--musiclives23

O.o I'm WOW'ed. It flowed great in my mind, and it was so mysterious!! I loved it. A truly dark poem. Nicely done.

I really lovee this poem
good job 5/5