This is so good, really true in some cases and made me want to keep reading. great job! xx

Yay!
I like this ending better... It's more round-a-bout.

I LOVE YOU.
[[Times like twelve...ish?]]

Hehe.
--MEEEE!

Oh yeah. I like this poem a lot. But I think I already told you that... Heh.

I like it more than I like bubbles eating cranberry sauce on easter.

Way more.
[[Now dat aughta 'ave tolj'a sumthin'.]]
PS: I love youuuu. [[With bubbles.]]

Wow, I read that and it literally left me speechless.
Its so deep and sad!! I just had come across this poem randomly over the site. I'm glad I found it!! ^^ xx Roxy, Keep it up!! Hope to find some more some day

Amazing poem, excellently written. Keep up the fantastic work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

5/5. wow. astounding poem. so intriguing and poetic. well done. keep writing. its awesome so keep it up

I LOVE THIS ONE HUNNI. STAY STRONG

-TRISHA