I really like this poem, form of it is excellent. It is short but still very powerful, you created interesting atmosphere with just a few words.

This was a good poem not your best but you did well on the stanza good job keep up the good work Plot121

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I frigging loved this.
This is my favourite style of formed poetry, and you mastered it beautifully here.

Despite the Triolet structure being relatively short, you managed to display such depth and emotion in this piece and I found the flow to be good throughout the piece.

This was wonderfully written, and the fact that it was a triolet was an added bonus for me.

I love the old school style you have mixed with a little bit of new school it's makes for a very interesting read. Fantastic job as always 5/5 GG23

Short but sweet a really cool poem, language was fantastic xxx alex xxx