Comments : In a matter of seconds. by Stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    First thing: My name is Stephanie too! =) Hehe.

    Ok, anyway. Fabulous job on the poem. Very emotional, the flow was flawless, & your word usage was great.

    "As i lie awake
    my eyes roll back
    things i never wanted to see again
    start to reenact"

    ^ I love those lines - Fantastic write, keep it up! 5.5 =)

    Stephanie Lynn .+. ;]

  • 17 years ago

    by Bexx

    Good job on this poem. I give it a 5